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3:15 AM, Saturday December 23rd 2023
Superimposed lines: Looking pretty good, nothing to say here.
Ghosted lines: Try more confident strokes, your lines are minorly wobbly which'll improve with time.
Ellipses in planes: Again, try to be more confident with your strokes, some of the ellipses don't quite reach.
Tables of ellipses: Remember to draw ellipses two times around!
Funnels: Also remember to draw ellipses two times around.
Rough perspective: Looks good.
Organic perspective: Try to have a more gradual decrease in size of boxes, don't try to draw super small boxes.
Overall, pretty good, I think you could use some redo on some of the exercises, but you're doing pretty well so far. I think it's cool that you wrote down what you used on the funnels exercise! Good job, you'll definitely get better!
Next Steps:
Redo 1 table of ellipses, and 1 funnel.
7:37 PM, Saturday December 23rd 2023
Thank you for your feedback
12:30 AM, Sunday December 24th 2023
These look better, just make sure to do two complete rotations. good job!
Next Steps:
250 box
Staedtler Pigment Liners
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).