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6:30 PM, Monday November 30th 2020

This is vastly improved over before, and I am especially pleased with your tomatoes. The only thing I want to quickly remind you of is that you should avoid any kind of zigzagging of your leaf edge lines back and forth as you do on the tomato plant's leaves. You tend to do it in small chunks, but you still draw a single stroke that goes back and forth, rather than drawing each individual bump as a separate stroke that comes off the original edge and returns to it.

Anyway, I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

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Feel free to move onto lesson 4.

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8:57 PM, Monday November 30th 2020

Got it, thank you!

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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

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