Hey Bitcloud

I can clearly seen the improvements that you made over time.

  • The lines extend in the right direction so you understand the perspective of the viewer.

  • Rare divergences. Your lines are either parallel or converge correctly, making your boxes look right.

Things to improve

  • Your hatching lines are sometimes fraying in both ends or overshoot the border. Just like in lesson 1 ghosted lines, you should place the pen carefully at the start of each line (in the line of the box) so it can only fray in one end in the worst case.

  • Wobbly lines: All lines have to be drawn by drawing first by ghosting it and then drawing it confidently with the shoulder prioritizing confidence over accuracy. Your lines sometimes wobble or are curved, probably because you try to reach the correct endpoint.

  • Especially in the first half of your challenge, the third line for a VP doesn't meet the defined VP by the first two lines. Try to have a clear image in your mind where the lines meet, ghost the line and then draw it. You will get better over time, as you have already shown in the second half of the challenge.

I think you have done the important things correctly enough to mark this lesson as complete.