Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
3:04 AM, Monday November 16th 2020
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10:50 AM, Wednesday January 13th 2021
Hello
I'll start by saying your line quality is very good, its crisp and sharp but i see maybe you are rushing a lot of exercises it looks like it
LINES
- super imposed lines
you did good with little fraying
- ghosted lines
this one is also good
3.ghosted planes
you did well, the diagnols bisect each other.
ELLIPSES
- table of ellipses
well, you made some mistakes. the ellipses are out of the box and some dont touch the edge but its not that big, its ok
2.ellipses in planes
you drew the planes well but your ellipses are pretty much out of place.
- funnels
your funnels seems very very rushed.
the conclusion is that either you are not good at drawing ellipses or you rushed it. idk which one it is.
BOXES
1.plotted perspective
you did good
2.rough perspective
you did pretty well but you're boxes are off shape but its ok
3.rotated boxes
you did good
4.organic perspective
here's where you got everything wrong. the boxes and meant to be above the lines, but you drew it everywhere other than the line. that's unnecessary. i think you did not understand the exercise well. Please rewatch the video and do it again.
Next Steps:
do organic perspective again
7:50 PM, Tuesday July 13th 2021
Thanks for the feedback! I took a bit of break to focus on some other things, but am starting to jump back into the program. I was in the middle of the box challenge, but I will revisit organic perspective before I continue.
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