8:52 PM, Wednesday December 1st 2021
This is vastly improved over your previous attempt, and is much more in line with what the exercise asks for. One thing to keep an eye on is to avoid including any kind of complexity in that initial silhouette structure. So for example, as shown here, leaf 10 has an additional bump in this early structure that should be left for a later phase of construction.
Next Steps:
Feel free to move onto lesson 4.