4:33 PM, Monday August 2nd 2021
good job completing Lesson 2, all exercises look great though not much to say, the only mistake I see is in shading on intersections - when you shade round forms like sphere and cylinder with hatching lines that kinda flattens the form (i.e. spheres look cut off) - instead try hatching like exercise suggests.
Good luck in your art journey!
10:45 AM, Tuesday August 3rd 2021
Ah - thanks for pointing that out! I knew it looked wrong, but wasn't sure what else to do, you pointed me in the right direction!