I'm assuming that you were using the same dying pen when laying down the basic construction of your leaves, and switched to one with richer lines when adding detail. As I'm sure you now understand (though perhaps not since you did it in your revisions), you should only be using pens that are creating rich, dark lines. While there is obviously the temptation to make use of that faint grey line, as you did here, it defeats the purpose of how Drawabox approaches learning and isn't all that different from using a pencil instead.

One thing that stood out a lot in your leaves is that you're really focused on detail and texture. Because you're more interested in how you're going to tackle the texture of your leaves, you end up distracted when actually drawing the underlying construction. As a result, you start repeating the same leaf forms (the top row of the first page of leaves, for example), you don't really think about how they're flowing through space (the lavender, rose leaf, mulberry leaf are all just laid flat upon the surface of the page, as are several in the second page). You also completely skip construction on the maple leaves both times (I'm unsure of what you mean by fixing construction on the second one, since as explained here you skip quite a few steps). I actually have a demonstration on how to approach drawing a maple leaf correctly right here. As you can see there, everything is built up with simple shapes/forms, and we never move ahead until there is enough of a scaffolding to support the next level of complexity.

The rest of the submission is fine. For your branches, just two simple things to keep in mind:

• Get used to lifting your pen when you hit the end point, as right now you tend to veer off track right at the last second. This might be because you're trying to slow to a stop, so lifting the pen off the page is a more reliable, immediate action you can perform.

• When your line does veer off the track, make sure you draw your next line so it overlaps the previous one directly. This will make drawing each individual leaf harder, but will ultimately force you to learn from the mistakes, since you're made to actually deal with their results instead of drawing your next stroke where the previous one ought to have been.

Your other constructions are coming along decently, for the most part. There's still room for improvement but these are going in the right direction.

Now, as I still feel you're getting distracted and focusing on the texture when you should be focusing on construction, I'm going to ask for another 2 pages of leaves - this time with no texture whatsoever. Make a point of rereading the instructions for this exercise. If you're interested in seeing what other students have drawn for their leaves, take a look at this example. Many students like to go through other students' submissions (which you can do by clicking on the "View Homework Submissions" button on the lesson page, and then turning off "Community Submissions" in the filter to see only the ones I've critiqued.