Hello Pelletproject,


Superimposed lines seem to wobble wuite a bit, remember to ghost each one, draw from the shoulder and be confident over accurate.

This is also the case with your ghosted lines, you seem to be focusing on conecting the dots over making one fluid line.


I realy like your Planes, while the lines have the issues mentiones avobe, the elipses are realy good, on some of them you focus to much on touching the sides and sacrifice the round shape of the elipse, but over all they are very confidant and they will become accurate with time, keep it up.

Tables are also good, confidence wise you are almost there. Remeber to ghost and draw from shoulder.

Funnels are good, nicely aligned, remember elipses should barely touch eachother and only do UP TO 3 PASSES, i can see you did 4 on some.


Rotated boxes are quite good, some minor alignment issues remember https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/9a16c189.jpg the distance between boxes should be consistant, also there are some rotation issues mostly on the alst boxes, they should be rotating harder to avoid this https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg.

Also dont overdo lineweight, keep it to one superimposed line.

Organic persepctive is realy nice, but i notice you did multple passes for some lines, correcting them. Dont do this, this covers up the mistake and makes it harder to see, the objective is not something pretty but to learn.

Over all really nice first lesson