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9:26 PM, Wednesday May 19th 2021

I didn't see any specific question you were asking, but the things you're describing are not out of the ordinary. People respond to the challenges involved in learning new things differently - all we can ultimately do, and all this course asks of you is that you execute the work to the best of your current ability, without rushing, because that is the only way we'll be able to see what your real limitations are. Identifying them is the first step to finding ways to break past them.

12:58 PM, Saturday May 29th 2021

Hello,

Here's the response you've initially waited for - the link to re-tried exercises, which is: https://imgur.com/a/qVAeN3S

If there's any comment I could give it would be: I just don't know

Looking forward to your comments on this and re-trying again cause I'm personally not happy at all about the results but that seems to be all I can do

9:49 PM, Saturday May 29th 2021

While there's still work to do these are an improvement.

You aren't drawing through your organic forms still which is definitely something you should do in the future. You're pushing your shadows which is good, but you tend to focus on just the ending point of your forms rather than considering the entire form.

As for form intersections I'm glad you're drawing larger, you still have some inconsistencies and could use more time planning some of your forms but this is a step in the right direction.

I'll be marking your submission as complete and moving you on to lesson 3.

Keep practicing previous exercises as warm ups, re-read through your previous critiques carefully and make sure you follow the instructions provided by them and the lessons correctly.

Good luck with the rest of the course, I hope you achieve your goals.

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 3.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
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