10:56 AM, Monday May 25th 2020
Lines
Lines are pretty good and confident in general, keep practicing like that and you'll nail the accuracy. Only issue I see is that you got fraying on both ends in some of your lines. Don't forget to place your pen carefully at the start of each line before drawing them.
Ellipses
Ellipses are p good too. Remember that on table of ellipses, the ellipses should touch top and bottom lines, and touch the ellipses at their sides. It's hard to do it, but be sure you're aiming for it.
On funnels, remember that the minor axis should cut the ellipses in 2 even halves, same thing, be sure you're aiming for it.
Boxes
P good job overall too.
You're repeating some lines, so remember that no matter how off a line is, you shouldn't repeat it.
I also think you aren't plotting some of your lines, so if this is correct, don't forget to place starting and ending dots before drawing each line. Be careful with that, as it's pretty important to apply the ghosting method.
On organic perspective I recommend doing more overlaps. You can clarify after the overlaps by adding a confident, drawn with the shoulder superimposed line on the part of the silhouette of the boxes that overlap. Perspective on them has issues but you'll work on it on the box challenge, so don't worry about it!
Next Steps:
First of all, congratulations on finishing lesson 1! Your next step is the box challenge.
As I marked this as complete, you are now qualified to critique lesson 1 submissions.
-Doing critiques is a way of learning and solidifying concepts. I can atest to that after having done hundreds of critiques. There are a lot of concepts that I did not understand, and thanks to critiquing I started understanding them. Which made me learn a lot more through the course.
-Another thing is that as the number of current submissions is super high, if you critique some critiques, those would be less critiques I'd have to critique before reaching your next submissions, so you'd get your critiques faster.
It's totally optional of course, I won't force anyone to give critiques. But me and the other people who are critiquing would be super grateful if you gave it a shot.
Good luck on the box challenge, and keep up the good work!
NOTE: here's a quick guide on critiquing lesson 1 submissions.
There are a few people that feel hesitant to critique because they feel they aren't ready to it so hopefully it'll help you in case you are one of those people.
