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10:02 AM, Thursday January 12th 2023
edited at 10:04 AM, Jan 12th 2023

It's still a bit wobbly, which is why I said that. Can you try to experiment a bit on a page with speed until you can draw them fully confident and then give me another page of organic forms? In lesson 2 you drew them confidently so you should be able to do it.

If you have any doubts please ask, good luck!

edited at 10:04 AM, Jan 12th 2023
7:01 PM, Thursday January 12th 2023

https://imgur.com/a/BMkRZ2T okay thanks how about now then

8:02 AM, Sunday January 15th 2023

Alright, thats looking better now! Good job!

So like I said on the first critique I wanted to make sure you could approach the lines confidently, and since you can now, I want you to do 2 more insect drawings, remember all the 4 things I said on the first critique and remember to ask any doubts if you have them. Good luck!

Next Steps:

2 more insect drawings

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
3:12 PM, Sunday January 22nd 2023

https://imgur.com/a/I1xTbMj hi this my rev sorry if not good as u expect from me but today was tough so this what i could please make me pass this time

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