1:10 AM, Thursday August 4th 2022
Alrighty, given that this is your second attempt, I'm going to try to avoid any unnecessary repetitions here. Starting with your arrows, you've got good confidence and fluidity. Do however take more time in adding the line weight - your addition of line weight tends to be quite scratchy, with a lot of separate marks. Use the ghosting method, and execute just one mark. If it doesn't fall where you want it to, that's fine - you'll get better at that with practice. But going back over it repeatedly will just encourage you to put less time into the planning and preparation, instead compensating by putting more marks down. That said, this is vastly better than before, and in terms of the limited use of line weight, you're doing well.
Continuing onto your leaves, just as before, you're drawing the initial shapes fine, with a good bit of confidence/fluidity behind each flow line, carrying over well into the simple silhouette. That said, what I had raised issues about in my critique of your first attempt was with how you were adding edge detail, and it seems like you decided to solve that by skipping that step entirely. Unfortunately that doesn't demonstrate to me that you understood what I laid out previously, or that you would do so correctly when the need arose, so that is unfortunate.
Edit: I've just finished the critique - looking back on your submission comment, it did cross my mind just now that you may have considered edge detail to be 'texture'. The edge detail in our leaves is structural, and thus is part of the constructional process.
Moving onto your branches, while again your work here is definitely improved, you appear not to have addressed the point I raised in my previous critique:
Moving onto your branches, it seems you may not have followed the instructions all that closely here. This exercise focuses heavily on how the segments flow from one to the next, to create a smooth, seamless impression. As explained here in the instructions, each segment must go from one ellipse, past the second, and stop halfway to the third. The next segment then begins at the second ellipse and repeats the pattern.
You generally tend not to extend your edge segment fully halfway to the next ellipse, and also have some instances where you do not start your next segment at the previous ellipse, but rather start closer to where the previous one ends - though this second issue is less common in your work. As an additional recommendation, it helps a great deal to try and use the last chunk of the previous segment as a runway, overlapping it directly when drawing the next stroke (instead of drawing where it ought to have been). This does make things a little more difficult (in that we're forced to deal with any slip-ups in the previous stroke's placement), but also helps us learn more from that mistake directly.
Now, getting onto your plant constructions, there's a lot here you're doing quite well. The general fluidity of your linework holds up nicely, so your leaves and branch structures continue to flow quite well through space. You're also generally building up the complexity of your forms well. That said, there are still a few points I want to call out:
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As you followed along with the potato plant demo in this drawing, I can see you going back over your lines a fair bit, and in a fairly arbitrary fashion. It's unclear if you're consciously doing so to add line weight, or if it's some manner of unconscious/reflexive action. If it is the former, then try to reserve your line weight for the specific localized areas where overlaps occur, as I mentioned in my last critique. If you're attempting to do so, then limit them farther - by the overlaps, it's specifically where the lines overlap, rather than where the entire form overlaps another. Here's what I mean. This line weight would be added with singular strokes executed using the ghosting method (as opposed to the scratchier separate marks you were adding here).
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It's also worth mentioning that you don't appear to have followed the potato plant demo in its entirety - it's best that you follow each demo from start to finish, rather than picking an arbitrary point at which to stop, otherwise you risk missing important points and concepts.
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I noticed here that you started with a more complex leaf silhouette than you should have - that kind of complexity should be added in successive stages.
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When constructing your cylindrical flower pots, be sure to do so around a central minor axis line to help you in aligning your ellipses to one another. Also, be sure to add enough ellipses to flesh out the entire structure in its entirety - including at minimum, another ellipse inset within the opening to establish the thickness of the rim, and another to establish the level of the soil, so the plant's stems have something to intersect with.
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On the topic of flower pots, I noticed that this ellipse came out quite rough - be sure to draw through your ellipses two times - no more, no less - execute them using your whole arm, from your shoulder (even when they're small), and use the ghosting method.
Now, I'm going to assign a number of revisions below, to address the points I've raised here.
Next Steps:
Please submit:
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1 page of leaves
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1 page of branches
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3 pages of plant constructions
Additionally, keep in mind that how much time a drawing is to take is not dependent on how much time you have to offer it in a given sitting. You may have 10 minutes, or you may have an hour, but regardless, it's the complexity of the object you're looking to draw that determines how much time it demands. If you don't have enough time, that's fine - start now, and finish up later. Spread it across as many sittings and days as you need to construct each form, draw each shape, and execute each mark to the best of your ability.