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10:38 AM, Monday May 27th 2024
Arrows
1. Mistake on lines: pass
2.Arrows not compressing: pass
3.Lineweight related: pass
Organic Forms
1.Mistakes on lines: pass
2.Not following the simple form they need to be; they should be 2 identical balls connected by a tube of consistent width: A few sausages exhibit the issues
3.Degrees of the ellipses/contours don't change, they stay static: pass
4.Not hooking contours: pass
5.Misaligned ellipses and not drawing the axis line: pass
6.Ellipses not touching the boundaries, or getting out of them: pass
Texture Analysis
1.Doing dotting or any kind of hatching to achieve transition: pass
2.Not doing a seamless transition on the gradients, if either the black bar on the left or the white bar on the right are really easy to spot because the transition isn't smooth enough: pass
3.All marks on this exercise should be done purposefully, and by looking at the reference before, so scribbling or doing non planned marks is a mistake: pass
Disections
1.Not wrapping the textures around the form: pass
2.Not breaking the silhouette: pass
Form Intersections
1.Repetition of lines, lines not being confident, not planing lines, not ghosting, clear divergences, not drawing through ellipses, etc.: pass
2.The forms need to have consistent foreshortening: some of the forms have extereme foreshortening or streched in one axis
Organic intersections
1.Not drawing simple forms. On this exercise the forms should be kept simple, just like in the previous organic forms exercises. 2 identical balls connected by a tube of consistent width: pass
2.Shadows sticking to the forms. The shadows have to follow the form of object they're being casted on, not the form of the object that casts it: pass
3.Not ghosting lines, not hooking the lines, adding linweight by tracing instead of drawing confident lines etc.: pass
4.Not drawing through forms. You should always draw through forms, just like in the form intersections exercise: pass
5.Drawing non stable forms: pass
Side note: There's a lack of lineweight on the sausages causing a bit confusion on which sausage lies on which.
Next Steps:
Do one page of form intersections (not page full of boxes but the mix of regular primitives like cylinders, boxes, cones, pyramids & spheres).
3:10 AM, Friday June 14th 2024
So what do I need to improve on sir, and what can I do to improve, like what type of exercises I can do before doing lessons
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