12:08 PM, Wednesday January 4th 2023
Hi, and welcome to drawabox. For the first 2 exercises, we’d have really preferred it if you redid them on paper, not because it makes much of a difference to us, but because it would’ve made some to you (going from exercise one to exercise 2 in the same medium). What’s done is done, however, so no worries. That said, what you have here is only the first page.
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Be so kind as to upload the entire album, please, and I’ll be glad to critique it.