2:41 PM, Friday January 31st 2025
Hello! I'm Joxmarf and I will be reviewing your Lesson 1
Superimposed Lines
There's some fraying. Remember to place your pen mindfully before doing the stroke.
Ghosted Lines
These are good. Some of your lines arc a bit. If you arer drawing from your shoulder, you could intentionally try to arc your stroke a bit in the opposite direction to counteract the natural curve.
Ghosted Planes and Ellipses
Some of your ellipses were only drawn through once. Your ellipses seem confidently drawn.
Table of Ellipses
Your ellipses are tight, but many of them aren't touching each other. Remember that you must avoid to keep them 'floating'.
Funnels
It is difficult, but remember to do your best to align them to the minor axis.
Plotted Perspective
Well done.
Rough Perspective
Well done.
Rotated boxes
You missed some boxes. Remember that, while the boxes in the corners are challenging, they are important and fear of 'ruining' the page will hold you back. Complete the exercise before moving onto the 250 challenge.
Organic Perspective
Well done. Your boxes have a shallow foreshortening, which helps keep the sense of scale consistent.
Next Steps:
FInish the rotated boxes exercise before moving onto the 250 box challenge. Add these exercises to your warmup pool. Good job!
