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Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

12:00 AM, Saturday May 1st 2021

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1:44 PM, Monday May 10th 2021

Hey Kirocosmos

You did a very good job with this lesson in my opinion, your lines are confident and straight both in the superimposed lines and ghosted lines .

your ellipses are also very good although your first page of tables of ellipses is better than the second, the second page seems to have some bumpier ellipses, but in general you did well.

boxes are also good can't point to any mistake, maybe just the rotating boxes, don't get me wrong it is a very good attempt,

but it seems like you didn't draw the boxes at each corner, like drawing three of them instead of four.

sorry if my critique is kinda bad, but I think you did a splendid job in general so I can't really pin point to any particular mistake.

Hopefully somebody else can and will point them.

In my opinion you should proceed to the 250 boxes challenge.

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I think you should begin the 250 boxes challenge, good job!

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8:56 PM, Sunday November 28th 2021

Thank you very much :) , and its not bad I want brutal that's honestly there the only way we can improve. Thank U very much. :)

9:02 PM, Sunday November 28th 2021

'I want brutal honesty that's the only way we can improve :)'

(tried editing but it's not working so yeah, the last thing makes no sense anyway have a great day, week, month, year, decade etc:)

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