11:23 AM, Monday March 7th 2022
hey Violightbug! i'm Koyomi and i'm going to review your lesson 1 submission.
1. lines
your lines are pretty wobbly, remember to prioritize confidence over accuracy. a confident line will always be correct no matter how off, accuracy is something that develops with time!
2. ellipses
i think that your ellipses are more confident than your lines so good job but i still notice some wobbles in your ellipses, just like with lines remember to prioritize confidence over accuracy.
on the ellipses table exercise i notice some ellipses that overlaps each other, remember to keep them within their bounds, they should touch each other without overlapping.
on the bottom left funnel of the funnels exercise, your ellipses are not getting separated in two symmetrical halves, because the minor axis is not centered.
3. boxes
on the rotated boxes exercise, some of your boxes are not rotating.
https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg
i think it would've been better if you did it bigger
appart from that i have not much to say about your boxes!
Next Steps:
move on to the 250 boxes challenge and good luck!!!