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2:22 AM, Tuesday November 24th 2020

[https://imgur.com/a/mRVn0jn][https://imgur.com/a/mRVn0jn]

Thanks for reviewing!! Much appreciate your time to go over my boxes. Still having a hard time making sure my lines converge to the vanishing point.

2:24 AM, Tuesday November 24th 2020
edited at 2:27 AM, Nov 24th 2020

Sorry try this link

https://imgur.com/a/942mktE

edited at 2:27 AM, Nov 24th 2020
9:02 PM, Tuesday November 24th 2020

This is a good improvement. Your lines are looking much straighter and more confident.

One thing before I send you off to lesson 2. Make sure that you are using a variety of foreshortening and orientations when you are practicing your boxes. Many of the boxes you drew for the challenge and your revisions had very shallow foreshortening. Varying your boxes is one of the ways that you will get the most out of your warm ups.

You can read more about this here.

Congrats again and good luck with lesson 2!

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Continue to lesson 2!

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2:50 PM, Wednesday November 25th 2020

Will do, I'll do them in my warm ups and post some in the community for feedback. Thank you!

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