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9:22 AM, Monday May 17th 2021

Good job for completing level 1

In the rough perspective it seems like you were correcting your strokes. If you mess one up just leave him like that. If your go over another time you only bring attention to the messed up area.

Also i would suggest that you keep drawing ellipses in your warm ups. They need a little bit more training

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Go to 250 box hell :D

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2:14 PM, Monday May 17th 2021

I agree that you can move on because I think you grasp the core concepts, but I would recommend working on your line making. I am not worried about the elipses missing there target because you still made concise and confident lines. However, in some of your ghosted lines, ghosted planes, and in the rough perspective, you appear to be more focused on accuracy over line making. While many of your lines do achieve this goal (especially in ghosted planes), there are quite a few that the line curves or wobbles to reach the desired point rather than making a confident line that misses the target. There is also several places in which you go back over a line and do it several times. Im not sure if that was by accident when ghosting the line, but it is not something that should be done. Overall, I think you did a good job and can move on to the 250 box challenge, just keep an eye on your linework and work on it in your warm-ups.

9:21 AM, Thursday May 20th 2021

Thank you for your reply! I'll do my best :)

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