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9:27 PM, Thursday May 6th 2021
Hi, I'll try and give you feedback I hope you find it useful.
I think your lines are really good, you did quite allot of superimposed lines. Your lines are really confident.
Your ellipses are also confident and they stay in bounds quite pretty well, they don't overlap either. They are pretty good!
Your boxes are constructed pretty well too, I think you should work on your perspective, so I think a good course of action for you to get better would to do the 250 box challenge, but I think you understand the lesson pretty well!
Next Steps:
250 boxes
Faber Castell PITT Artist Pens
Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.
Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.