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2:10 AM, Saturday September 10th 2022

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Your lines are confident enough great job not fraying on the start and end some are but it's still good.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few overshooting which is not a bad thing.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

I like you have overlap boxes.

8.Rough Perspective

Some of the lines are bit wobbles but the front of box are great

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines

And plotting the front of the boxes

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

All of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

A few wobbles but it's still good

You really did great Job on this thing.

This is a difficult homework but your work beautiful and so clean.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.

Most of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall.

Next Steps:

YOU'RE READY TO START 250 BOX CHALLENGE (WHENEVER YOU WANT OF COURSE). MAKE SURE HAVE 50% RULE AND WARMS UPS.

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7:44 PM, Tuesday September 20th 2022

Thank you so much for your comments! much appreciated, cheers!

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