Hi Eggoodma,

I've checked your submission,

Okay, we have a lot to cover, so I'm gonna try to highlight what's more important to improve from every exercise.

First of all I wanna talk about a common issue I see in yur lines all through this lesson, they are lacking confidence. Confidence>Accuracy: Drill this into your brain, you will use it for every line in this course (straight, organic, ellipses, etc.), you have to strive for confidence over anything else when making marks, accuracy comes with time and practice, so don't feel down if you don't hit all your lines or overshoot them. How do you apply confidence? The ghosting method. Confidence in your lines comes from you ghosting and repeating the motion until you feel ready to make a mark, take your time, don't rush learning.

Now, your organic arrows. These are looking pretty good, it seems that you are experimenting with them and bending them, and that's great! I only have one issue, you are not applying line wieght to every arrow. Remember, line weight it's not an aesthetic choice, it's a tool of communication that we use.

Remember to vary the wideness of your ellipses when doing organic forms. Another thing when you just put them contour lines, you are just wraping them in the edges of the form, then it looks like you are just connecting those parts with a mildly curved line. This is a very common mistake, so keep an eye on it.

When seeing your textures exercises, It seems like it was made by two different people. One is communicating implicitly the textures with cast shadows, and the other is explicitly trying to put every single detail they see in a texture. Now, i'm gonna clarify, the first one is doing things right, we can see this in your carpet dissections. I always recommend to go watch again the implicit vs explicit content video on the lesson, It really explains how we are supposed to draw things to make the viewer fool himself into thinking there is everything.

The main weakness of your form intersections exercise it's your line confident, but we have already talk about that.

In your organic forms, remember that cast shadows describe the object in which the shadow is cast, and not describing the object that is casting the shadow.

I'm gonna mark this lesson as completed! Keep it up.