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11:50 PM, Tuesday May 26th 2020

I can defs see improvement with accuracy between first pages and last pages, nice. Crisp lines, hatching improves (some sloppy ones in the 150 - 170 range).

Not sure if intentional, but there are a lot of boxes with extreme dustortion. Not a bad thing, but i think we're supposed to keep the distortions to a minimum. Have you checked out the section on 'additional info on boxes'? He talks about distortion there.

Next Steps:

Work on distortion free boxes, then move on to Lesson 2.

YAY!

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11:36 AM, Wednesday May 27th 2020

Hi. Thanks for the review. The notes on the 250 box challenge say that you should do both shallower and dramatic foreshortening.

2:48 PM, Wednesday May 27th 2020

i see that now. awesome. good job :)

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