11:50 PM, Tuesday May 26th 2020
I can defs see improvement with accuracy between first pages and last pages, nice. Crisp lines, hatching improves (some sloppy ones in the 150 - 170 range).
Not sure if intentional, but there are a lot of boxes with extreme dustortion. Not a bad thing, but i think we're supposed to keep the distortions to a minimum. Have you checked out the section on 'additional info on boxes'? He talks about distortion there.
Next Steps:
Work on distortion free boxes, then move on to Lesson 2.
YAY!