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10:33 AM, Tuesday July 7th 2020

Hi, I hope I could help you with my review

1) Superimposed Lines: Remember that the porpuse of this exsercise is to get your head around the confidence of your lines and get used to use your shoulder. Your lines seems wobbly. 

2) Ghosted Lines: Sane here, your lines are wobbly because you are trying to correct the course of the line, remember to ghost your movement using your shoulder and then making one sigle and confident line, it does not have to be perfect, just made with confidence.

3) Planes: The same here.

4) Tables of Ellipses and Ellipses in Planes: Remember that your ellipses have to touch the border of your frame in the tables exercise and the border of the planes in the other one.

I think the quality of your ellipses is pretty good, you just have to loose a bit and use more your shoulder to get more confident lines

Next Steps:

I would recomend you to re do Superimposed lines and ghosted lines exercises, again using your shoulder and make sure that each line is done in one movement, it doesn't have to be perfect.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
2:32 AM, Wednesday July 8th 2020

Thanks for the advice.

Link: (https://imgur.com/gallery/WBFeEWx)

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2:44 AM, Thursday July 9th 2020

I saw your redos, I think they are better and that you can continue to the250 box challenge.

Next Steps:

Continue to the 250 box challenge.

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