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4:25 PM, Friday January 19th 2024
Hello! great job on finishing the first lesson. I'll be providing some feedback on each lesson
superimposed lines- these look pretty solid
ghosted lines- some of the lines look a little wobbly. remember that wobbly lines are generally a mistake- even if it misses the mark, you're doing it correctly as long as your lines are straight and confident
ghosted planes- while your ghosted lines were a little wobbly in places, you seemed to improve on this problem in the ghosted planes. good job!
tables of ellipses- solid
ghosted ellipses- some of the ellipses are coming out of the plane by a lot. ghosting a few more times could help you in the future.
funnels- this was solid, though some of the ellipses weren't exactly symmetrical across the minor axis.
plotted perspective- solid
rough perspective- some of the lines miss the vanishing point by a great margin. make sure to ghost each line at least five times before placing the marks.
rotated boxes- some of the boxes perspectives are off, but overall solid
organic perspectives- some boxes look a bit skewed but you'll get a lot of practice with boxes
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overall i think you're good to move on to the 250 boxes challenge. just remember to ghost your lines each time throughout the challenge.
12:50 PM, Tuesday January 23rd 2024
thankk youuu, I will be sure to ghost the lines more to the challange. This was very helpfull S2
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6:15 PM, Wednesday January 24th 2024
Solid submission and solid review. However I would like to add :
Ellipses should be drawn through 2 or 3 times. Some are drawn more.
Never correct your lines. When you make a mistake when drawing your boxes (and you will make a lot) let it stay instead of redrawing the line.
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Good luck in your 250 boxes
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