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1:48 PM, Wednesday March 23rd 2022
edited at 1:53 PM, Mar 23rd 2022

Hello friend first of all thank you for putting your time to give critique of my 250 boxes lesson and here is my 30 boxes lesson also i agree that i don't put shadows on ,my boxes and my line weight is not correct also it seems i kinda of stuck in one angle of the box when drawing 250 boxes

https://imgur.com/a/hZqnqmm

btw i am using red pen when drawing boxes here also i am sorry if am making a lot of ink glob on my paper,is there any advice to avoid this ???

so i hope i am making a remedy of my previous 250 boxes lesson

thanks

edited at 1:53 PM, Mar 23rd 2022
11:30 PM, Wednesday March 23rd 2022

Thanks, you are doing much better, try to keep applying line weight on future attempts.

if you are using ballpoint pens consistently wipe the ball point tip on a napkin or cloth to clean excessive ink buildup on the ball.

Anyways, I'll go ahead and mark this as complete.

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6:01 AM, Sunday March 27th 2022

ok bro so are there any guides i can follow to give people critique for 250 boxes like u did to me ???

4:34 PM, Sunday March 27th 2022

yeah here it is : https://pastebin.com/dbjR9MFj

4:20 AM, Tuesday March 29th 2022

Here's a quick guide by Elodin: https://pastebin.com/dbjR9MFj

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