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4:48 PM, Sunday May 15th 2022

Hi ABEANBERRY. Thank you for your kind comments and pointing my mistakes. I have take some notes from your comments and try to learn from my mistakes. Here I've tried to remake what you've asked for.

Sorry if I have bad English for it is not my first language.


6:00 PM, Sunday May 15th 2022

Looks much better! I'll mark the lesson complete.

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5:30 AM, Monday May 16th 2022

Okay thank you ABEANBERRY :)

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