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12:39 AM, Saturday April 15th 2023

Hello DrDarkly, unfortunately it seems that my feedback isn't being taken into consideration the way it should be, as the same issues present with your previous work can still be seen in this new page. You're not drawing through your forms and you're not following the branch construction method correctly for your plant consructions.

I'm going to be marking this submission as complete. While I believe these problems should be addressed before you move on to the next Lesson, I've already laid out the mistakes in your work, and how to fix them, now it's a matter of you taking the time to apply this feedback and follow the instructions correctly.

Good luck in Lesson 4.

Next Steps:

Don't forget to add these exercises to your warm up list.

Move on to Lesson 4.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
6:50 AM, Saturday April 15th 2023
edited at 6:52 AM, Apr 15th 2023

Thank you, I get what you are saying now I did not draw the center line of the branch that cuts through the minor axis of the ellipses and, yes it does look like I did not draw through the ellipses, when the ellipses are small it is quite difficult to draw through them, I get that I should be doing that.

Thanks for the feedback and I will work on it.

edited at 6:52 AM, Apr 15th 2023

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