Heya! This is my revisions for lesson 1. I submitted my work about a week or so ago, got a reply, but decided to just go through the entire exercises again. I don't mind going through them a third time!
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Since you did not receive a follow-up on your first submission, I understand why you decided to repeat the lesson, but avoid that in the future; otherwise, you'll tire yourself out, and that is not the point of Drawabox.
To answer the question you asked in the forum: if you see your submitted lesson does not get answered (especially Lesson 1) or you have any other doubts about the exercises, you can ask on the Drawabox Discord: https://discord.com/invite/drawabox. I highly recommend it—they helped me a lot.
Lines
Superimposed Lines
Nice! Your lines are confident and consistent, with almost no fraying at the start. Good job!
Ghosted Lines
I notice some wobbling. Remember, it's okay to lack perfect accuracy at the start in favor of keeping lines confident and straight.
Ghosted Planes
I notice a little more wobbling here. As stated before, do not let the fear of inaccuracy take over. Remember to use your shoulder for longer lines and ghost through each motion as many times as needed—accuracy will come with practice.
Ellipses
Table of ellipses
I see an improvement in confidence and accuracy—great job! Remember to draw each ellipse in this section 2-3 times in the same motion before lifting your pen to train it
You did not draw the corner boxes, and they do not rotate correctly: https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg. This one is hard it took me some time to get it right at first. Remember to gradually close your vanishing points as they get further from the center box.
Organic Perspective
Very nice! The linework here looks splendid, and your boxes seem to converge well for this phase.
I uploaded my review and now I notice that you were already working with someone, my bad
Next Steps:
Lets do those 250 boxes.
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Since you did not receive a follow-up on your first submission, I understand why you decided to repeat the lesson, but avoid that in the future; otherwise, you'll tire yourself out, and that is not the point of Drawabox.
To answer the question you asked in the forum: if you see your submitted lesson does not get answered (especially Lesson 1) or you have any other doubts about the exercises, you can ask on the Drawabox Discord. I highly recommend it—they helped me a lot.
Lines
Superimposed Lines
Nice! Your lines are confident and consistent, with almost no fraying at the start. Good job!
Ghosted Lines
I notice some wobbling. Remember, it's okay to lack perfect accuracy at the start in favor of keeping lines confident and straight.
Ghosted Planes
I notice a little more wobbling here. As stated before, do not let the fear of inaccuracy take over. Remember to use your shoulder for longer lines and ghost through each motion as many times as needed—accuracy will come with practice.
Ellipses
Table of ellipses
I see an improvement in confidence and accuracy—great job! Remember to draw each ellipse in this section 2-3 times in the same motion before lifting your pen to train it
You did not draw the corner boxes, and they do not rotate correctly: https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/d73eea49.jpg. This one is hard it took me some time to get it right at first. Remember to gradually close your vanishing points as they get further from the center box.
Organic Perspective
Very nice! The linework here looks splendid, and your boxes seem to converge well for this phase.
Next Steps:
Repeat the rotated box exercise rotating them.
When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
Nice! Your lines are confident and consistent, with almost no fraying at the start. Good job!
Ghosted Lines
I notice some wobbling. Remember, it's okay to lack perfect accuracy at the start in favor of keeping lines confident and straight.
Ghosted Planes
I notice a little more wobbling here. As stated before, do not let the fear of inaccuracy take over. Remember to use your shoulder for longer lines and ghost through each motion as many times as needed—accuracy will come with practice.
Ellipses
Table of ellipses
I see an improvement in confidence and accuracy—great job! Remember to draw each ellipse in this section 2-3 times in the same motion before lifting your pen to train it. This applies all the exercises here. See how each ellipse looks like it overlaps with some more, that's the goal of this exercise.
Ellipses in planes
It looks like you hesitated on some of your ellipses here. Remember: confidence over accuracy.
Funnels
Good! All your ellipses are confident and nicely divided.
Boxes
Starting commentary: I see a huge improvement in line confidence for this section. Great job!
Plotted Perspective
Nice! You took each step correctly.
Rough Perspective
You forgot to extend the lines toward the vanishing point: However, they do aim toward the vanishing point—good job
Rotated Boxes
You did not draw the corner boxes, and they do not rotate correctly: This one is hard it took me some time to get it right at first. Remember to gradually close your vanishing points as they get further from the center box.
Organic Perspective
Very nice! The linework here looks splendid, and your boxes seem to converge well for this phase.
Next Steps:
Since you did not receive a follow-up on your first submission, I understand why you decided to repeat the lesson, but avoid that in the future; otherwise, you'll tire yourself out, and that is not the point of Drawabox.
To answer the question you asked in the forum: if you see your submitted lesson does not get answered (especially Lesson 1) or you have any other doubts about the exercises, you can ask on the Drawabox Discord: https://discord.com/invite/drawabox. I highly recommend it—they helped me a lot.
When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
Sorry for the mess xd. In Next steps I meant to say you have to repeat the rotated box exercise but making sure to actually rotate them https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/21/notrotating
Well done! Now it's time for the 250 box challenge, good luck!.
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