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3:28 PM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

This is looking much better, and I don't feel you overdid it on the moose. Remember that these drawings are all exercises, and in working through them you're trying to solve a puzzle. I'm not concerned with whether you used too many forms - what I'm glad to see is that you tried to figure out how to achieve the intended result, using only these smaller additional forms, while figuring out how they'd relate to one another in space.

All in all I'm very pleased with your results. I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

Next Steps:

Feel free to move onto the 250 cylinder challenge, which is a prerequisite for lesson 6.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
9:47 PM, Thursday September 3rd 2020

Thanks so much again! Really appreciate it.

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