11:46 PM, Saturday February 19th 2022
Dear AN_DUH_SUN,
Firstly, I am still on lesson 1 myself so my advice should not be taken as dogma, but I'll try my best.
Superimposed Lines
Your lines flow as they should, with no fraying at the start. Good work.
Ghosted Lines
I see no wobbling or archs, just very neat lines. I would consider these lines to be level 2. Very good. If anything, you'll want to try longer lines, like at least half the length of the page to properly test if you draw from your shoulder on these lines.
Ghosted Planes
Excellent work. You redo lines at times but the end result is stunning.
Tables of Ellipses
The position of some of your ellipses seems to fall short of the borders and they aren't as tight as you may want yet, but I'm certain that those issues will be solved with practice.
Ellipses in Planes
Your planes nicely touch all sides and are properly formed. You're already very good at ellipses.
Funnels
Your ellipses seem to be mostly good. I didn't notice any errors that shouldn't improve with practice. You seem to have switched to a thicker pen at some point. This makes it harder to judge the quality of your work so please refrain from doing this in future. You also seem to have drawn a couple freehand ellipses. It is not possible for me to judge if they were drawn as intended.
Plotted Perspective
Some lines fall short of the vanishing points, you may try rechecking where both ends of your ruler are one last time before drawing your line. Otherwise your boxes look very neat.
Rough Perspective
It appears your biggest problem is undershooting your lines. It may help to ghost all the way to the vanishing point even if you wont draw that far.
Rotated Boxes
This exercise is very neatly done. The lines are straight, the boxes are close together and correctly turn. Very well done.
Organic Perspective
Nicely drawn. You've kept the illusion up rather well. At one point you've used another marker to go over your lines again. This makes it harder to judge the original lines. You may want to refrain from this in future.
Good luck, work hard and take plenty of breaks.
Best,
Mia
Next Steps:
If you continue with the 250 box challenge as the site recommends and do your warm-ups before each drawing session I'm confident you will have had enough practice to properly start with lesson 2, by the time you finish the challenge.
You may also try experiment with longer lines to make sure you can draw those properly as well.
