11:53 PM, Tuesday January 19th 2021
Hi! Thank you for taking care of this review and I hope that the other person feels better soon.
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Applying the right line weight with a Sharpie (Ultra Fine Point) is not easy at all—thin lines, at least. The reason why is because the ink leaks out very easily, which is why I later switched to a Staedtler fineliner. From what you are telling me, it seems that it would be okay to go through the motion of ghosting original lines to add weight, even though it means that I will inevitably draw new lines next to the original ones, in which case it wouldn't add weight to them at all... Also, what if I tried to add weight to only a tiny portion of a line that appears closer? Would I still have to use my entire arm or would it suffice to just use my wrist and trace over that little portion? (I would assume that I shouldn't do that.)
I'm asking for clarification because this is not the first time someone has told me that my lines are too thick and wobbly, so here is what I understand:
- You want me to use the ghosting method and not rely on any previous lines that I have made, even if I am trying to add weight to said previous lines, and not change my markmaking approach, which will apparently improve my accuracy.
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As for my ellipses in the organic forms, all I am trying to do is commit to the marks that I make, sometimes at the price of confidence, I admit.
I'm confused as to how you would be able to see confidence either way in lines that are not committed and go all over the local areas as you call them. What if I did so, only then for me to be told that I have to work yet again on line weight? Which one do you want? – Motion? Weight that commits to original or "local area" lines? Is it just a matter of letting my accuracy improve over time and that I simply can't do anything about having both confident motion and good line weight for the time being?
Again, the Sharpie that I used up to the texture analyses is very sensitive to pressure, so most lines were done with the least amount of pressure possible. I would say they were done with a range of small to medium pressure.
I think I did make multiple passes with contour curves. I will do them with only one pass in the future.
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Some textures seem indistinguishable if I don't focus on the more particular elements. How could I make wood fibers pop if they do not even protrude? You would only get a rectangular plank or a flat surface if it is processed wood like the one I used as reference.
Instead of hatching lines, would you say it would be better for me to think of 3D gradients as solid shadow shapes created by the bigger bumps on the surface? Since I was looking at a wood plank, there was not much difference on the surface at all—only the numerous fibers that didn't protrude seemed to qualify as "texture"—, so it may have been a bad choice of reference. I did the same thing with the strawberry, but at least now the solution here is easier for me to grasp... However...
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... I have seen how you depict alluminium, meat, kiwi, beetle shell and chrome in some homework examples, which are "flat" textures like the two last ones I made in the previous analysis exercise.
I suppose I will have to exaggerate the lighting to push some shadows and make one side really dark instead of relying too much on outlines like I did... Still, it's very much a case by case study, so I'm not so sure.
I do have the tendency to observe a lot, to a fault. What ends up happening is that I try to emphasize as many little shapes as I can to make the subject obvious, which sacrifices some emphasis on shadows because of the shapes that I see in them and resorting to hatching instead, but that appears to not be the point of the exercise. I think I understand what was asked of me, but I will check the instructions once more to make sure. I will try to not get carried away next time.
When looking back at the homework examples, I notice that they are much lighter and less clogged than mine. Still, were it not for the words you've attached next to them, I wouldn't be able to identify some of them (like the hairy arm, bark or concrete). Perhaps even this is not something that I should focus on.
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What to keep in mind: ghosting method; executing confident lines and not lifting the pen until I have done 2 circuits of an ellipse; drawing from the shoulder.
So when you say that the third step of ghosting takes care of execution in making a confident stroke, you are essentially saying that what the third step accomplishes is out of my control, except for the fact that I choose to be either hesitant or confident in whatever stroke is produced and that it can still, regardless of any effort, turn out to be a mistake and that this is the type of mistake that you want to see instead of having students try to cover them up by choosing to be "hesitant" (tracing the lines or slowing down when they feel that they are making a bad stroke). Thus, accuracy is left up to the previous two steps, but the third one—the actual markmaking—only serves to deliver something "confident". But then, it gets very confusing to me as to what qualifies as something that actually passes the exercice or what confidence actually is and what you mean by it. Do I just make a mark and leave it all up to luck after having determined the type of line and required motion needed to make it? Is this not recklessness? Oh, but wait, it can't be reckless because I have already tried the best I could to approximate the type and motion of the stroke in the first two steps. That said, what if I did a line confidently, with my shoulder, but it appears to be too thick or wobbly nonetheless? What if the resulting accuracy, that I have tried to calculate in my mind in the first two steps of ghosting, does not add any weight to any line? I guess I would just have to redo every exercice that demands ghosting lines until, somehow, I happen to get it "right" by pure luck, and I use the word "luck" because that's how it feels regardless of the first two steps.
---> "Confidence" now means "choosing to accept that the second your pen touches the page, any opportunity to avoid a mistake that may or may not happen has now passed".
"Finally, the third in the line is responsible for making a single, smooth, confident stroke. They're not responsible for accuracy, for how closely you reproduce that planned, prepared motion. It's just to make a simple stroke - and you know you can make a smooth stroke because if you go to a page and draw them as quickly as you can without even thinking about which stroke you want to make, they'll come out smoothly. Their job is just to make the mark with no hesitation, because they have nothing to hesitate about."
I will remind myself of that.
I admit that I have not been doing regular warmups with exercices introduced in lesson 1. I will be sure to do more of them.
I will also be sure to make shorter cylinders, boxes and pyramids.
So, line weight again... I think the same problem you've mentioned happened here too (sphere and cone): https://i.imgur.com/OY7ZcEC.png
From what I understand, line weight should never do a big "jump" in thickness from the rest of its length—only just enough for it to be noticeable, yet not outright conspicuous. It's especially obivous if I merge a new stroke with an old one to make it look as if I intentionally wanted to make it thicker, only for the purpose of making the shapes look more accurate than those initial lines that I've made. Once again, this goes back into the issue of how I think of the ghosting process. If I had been more accepting of my initial lines, there would be much less thickness in the ones shown here... There would be, however, a lot more diverging lines in "local areas"... in which case, would thickness of a line rely more on the number of lines that I make while following the same approximate motion of an original one? I would imagine that it would look smoother, but perhaps less accurate.
I read all the written instructions and watch the videos linked to them at least once before doing the exercices—that is, until I have a pretty good idea of what I should do. They are quite lengthy, so I do happen to forget some details as time goes on.
I will take some time to review not just the exercices that you've assigned for me, but also everything up to this point. I'll see how it turns out.