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1:51 AM, Tuesday November 2nd 2021

You could use less contour curves on your organic forms, using a lot of them undermines the construction.

Also I don't think necessary to use countour lines on wings as they are mostly flat.

The legs on the jumping spider feel flat, you could construct larger sausages and build on top of them.

Everything else seems consistent, so good job.

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4:16 AM, Wednesday November 3rd 2021

I'll take note of these. Thanks for taking the time!

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