Hello! I'm Joxmarf and I will be reviewing your Lesson 1 :)

Superimposed Lines

There's some frying. Remember to not only think about ghosting and doing your stroke confidently, but also where you place your pen. Confidence over accuracy. Prioritizing the latter may be causing your lines to wobble. Remember

Ghosted Lines

Once again: Remember not to focus on accuracy, but on the confidence of your marks. Time and practice will make your lines more accurate. Also, once again, some of your lines arc. Remember to, when you start executing the stroke, focus only on the end point and draw confidently enough not to allow your brain to steer the stroke. Overall good job!

Ghosted Planes

Well done.

Table of Ellipses

I see you are drawing through your ellipses two full times, which is great. Remember to do them fast and light. They are not very tight but that’s okay, it’ll come with time.

Ellipses in Planes

Your ellipses are drawn with confidence and they are touching all the 4 edges of the plane. Once again,many of them are woobly.

Funnels

It is quite difficult, but I would like to note that some of your ellipses are not aligned to the central minor axis line. Also, some ellipses are not touching touching the lines enclosing them or each other. Remember to respect the boundaries you established.

Plotted Perspective

Well done.

Rough Perspective

Good job, you are working with one vanishing point, as the exercise states.

Rotated boxes

Well done, but you are missing some boxes on the corners.

Organic Perspective

Well done. You could vary the size and angles on the boxes