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8:54 PM, Tuesday September 3rd 2024

nice job! for the arrows, they could use some extra overlap if need be, and should have tighter spaces between bends the further away they go. outside of that they look great! the textures you did were great as well, even showing areas where the "lighter" areas were less detailed on the dissections

some of your form intersections look a tad off personally (the bottom left sphere and cylinder in form intersections #4 comes to mind), outside of that i'd say you did the homework very well!

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move onto lesson #3, feel free to practice form intersections and arrows

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4:54 AM, Wednesday September 11th 2024

Thank you very much! I appreciate the feedback regarding the arrows and intersections. I will focus on those in future warm-ups.

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