11:51 AM, Saturday October 22nd 2022
Okay, there’s definitely some improvement here. I can clearly see that you’ve started with a central flow line and two simple curves for the sides of your leaf in every case, and on most of them it looks like you made a good attempt at having them connect together. I’ve done a mark up on your work here https://imgur.com/a/6qI9lSb in red are some areas where you’re still leaving arbitrary gaps between your marks (and one where you did much better, marked with a tick and “good” well done) Accuracy will improve with mindful practice, so that’s just something to keep working on as you go forward.
Marked in blue are a couple of notes on edge detail. One place where you did great, and another where there is room for improvement. Here’s another diagram from Comfy showing how to build edge detail in stages using simple marks, which may help you. https://imgur.com/MXCZGDy
Marked in orange are 3 places where you went off the page. I’ve already spoken at length why it is better to keep your forms contained on the page and discussed strategies to help you control your marks. If you didn’t understand, please let me know and I will try to explain another way.
This is a big improvement from your first page of leaves, and while there’s still things to work on I think you will learn more by moving on to lesson 4, so I’ll go ahead and mark this as complete. Good luck with your exams.
Next Steps:
Feel free to move on to lesson 4