7:42 PM, Monday June 14th 2021
Overall these are definitely looking better. There's just a couple things I want you to keep in mind:
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For the cactus on this page, I recommend you give this diagram a read. It explains why we can alter the silhouette of our leaves and petals (which are already flat), and not on more voluminous structures (which get flattened out as a result).
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For the drawing on the left side of this page, the individual petals, especially on the leftmost trunk, were visibly sloppier than they could have been. Remember that regardless of how many lines a drawing requires you to draw, you should be executing each mark and each component to the absolute best of your current ability. That simply means taking the time to execute them using the ghosting method.
Anyway, I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.
Next Steps:
Move onto lesson 4.