Hello, I'm Zxem and today I will critique your work my best. Before that I divided the lesson into 3 section which are Lines , Ellipse and Boxes
LINES
• Superimposed Lines - Doing great for short lines but for the longers it's good but not good as the short ones. The longers of the lines are fraying which is not we are aiming for especially for A point ( the starting point) it's acceptable when the lines become fraying at the end of the line ( B point ). So to prevent that, place the pen carefully at the beginning of each line so this does not happen.
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• Ghosted lines - there are some lines that didn't reach to B point or went wrong direction. The name of this work is called " Ghosted lines " so once you put point A and B ghost the lines until you are sure that the line will go the place want.
• Ghosted plane - Doing great for the lines. Whenever you draw an ellipse, it's better to ghost the ellipse before you draw and once you put your pen down , draw the ellipse twice or maximum trice.
ELLIPSE
• Ellipse in Plane - Doing great , I have no comments on this, the ellipses are clear. Remember try not to overlap the ellipsu..
• Funnel - Doing great job (???^???^?).
BOXES
• Plotted perspective - Great job, I do recommend to put lineweight boz the lines are light it's kinda hard to see.
• Rough perspective - Try not to repeat the lines even if the lines are not good, it's better to leave them as it is a try to get better in the next one by ghosting the lines as I mentioned above.
• Rotate Boxes - You did good, there are no much gap between the boxes and the boxes rotating.
• organic Perspective - you did good on this one too, the boxes are following perspective.
So I'll mark this lessonas complete.
Next Steps:
Congratulations and Good Luck for your next challenge and remember to do warm of these exercises.
https://drawabox.com/lesson/0/3/warmups
NEXT CHALLENGE : 250 boxes challeng
This is a remarkable little pen. Technically speaking, any brush pen of reasonable quality will do, but I'm especially fond of this one. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
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