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11:30 PM, Monday May 25th 2020

Hi again, Hawks0.

I'm glad you took the time to do the requested page, although I must say that I was hoping for a much cleaner work. You did seem to get the perspective better on your boxes, but your line work still needs a lot of improvement. Remember that each line should only be drawn once. You shouldn't go over the same lines, except when specifically requested, i.e. on the ellipses or to increase the line weight.

I've still marked this lesson as complete, but I'm hoping you take my advice in the further exercises, in order to improve your line work.

Next Steps:

250 boxes challenge.

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5:28 PM, Tuesday May 26th 2020

Thanks for the advice... I really appreciate it.

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