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6:07 PM, Thursday January 27th 2022
Hey H0zynt I'll review your lesson
Before beginning with critiquing the exercises I'd like you to scan or post bigger photographs of your drawings, the last one you uploaded is perfect in that regard. The thing is that I'm having an hard time looking for mistakes, imgur doesn't let me zoom that much in most of your drawings, and putting them on paint lowers the resolution. So if you can, next time scan your drawings. (anyway this might be more of a me problem, but I felt like saying it)
Arrows: Well done! the arrows get bigger as they come closer to the viewer and are also very fluid! Well done with the hatching!
Leaves: like for the arrows, your leaves have a nice flow and are well constructed, the details at the edges are also well drawn, not zigzaging in a continuous flow but instead making more individual lines for each detail.
Branches: well done in varying the ellipses degrees and also in constructing them with multiple strokes
Plant construction
In general you did splendidly.
You are constructing well the forms and making them look 3D
the construction of the stem of the carnivorous plant looks solid, as in the previous exercise the degrees of the ellipses change and the lines are also used correctly to draw the form, although near the end of the plant you redrew some of them. (you should leave your errors be in theory and not redraw the lines, but anyway the whole drawing is very well done)
Honestly I wasn't so sure whether to critique your lesson or not, because I think you did basically everything well, so I don't think I have much to suggest you to improve.
Anyway good work!
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