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1:42 PM, Saturday July 24th 2021

Of course!

I retook a picture of the sheet. Here is the link:

https://imgur.com/gallery/PlAPegh

Have a nice week-end!

9:48 PM, Saturday July 24th 2021

Thank you for the new picture. It looks like you are doing a better job of getting your sets of lines to converge towards their shared vanishing points.

Keep in mind, as you continue to draw more complex forms, you should be taking your time at each step of your construction to ensure that you are employing the ghosting method correct and constructing your forms correctly as well.

I noticed a few areas where the quality of your mark making dips and your lines appear less confident in many areas as well.

All that being said, you can now continue to lesson 2!

Good luck!

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Continue to lesson 2!

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8:17 AM, Sunday July 25th 2021

Thanks a lot! I'm glad to have completed this challenge

Lesson 2 also seems quite of a challenge. I made the first attempts and I got a bad critics...I still can't put the organic arrow in 3D and I have trouble with ellise shape in the exercice organic form with contour lines T_T

Have a nice week-end!

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