Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
12:26 PM, Saturday January 27th 2024
Tentei fazer 1 exercício por dia, não sei se isso era o certo
Olha só, mais um brasileiro por aqui. Bom, eu vou avaliar a sua lição 1 em inglês e depois vou mandar em português, beleza?
English:
Superimposed lines: not bad, but their lines deviate from their trajectory (it's as if they make curves to return to where they should stop).
Ghosted lines and ghosted planes: I notice that the lines are arched. If you still have this problem, make sure you are drawing with your shoulder and try curving in the opposite direction.
Table of ellipses: good ellipses, but some have a strange shape.
Ellipses in planes: your ellipses are a little better, but there is still deformation.
Funnels: the minor axes are slightly misaligned in some funnels, this happened because you may have got the angle of the center line wrong. Keep practicing ellipses!
Plotted perspective: not bad!
Rough perspective: this exercise is really difficult. The first page isn't that good, but the second is better. I see that you extended the lines correctly.
Rotated boxes: WOW! It's great.
Organic perspective: I see that you understand how to use line weight.
I liked what I saw. I think you have a lot of potential to continue improving. Regarding how many pages to draw per day, do it in a way that you feel comfortable with, but stay consistent and apply the 50% rule.
I will mark your lesson as complete.
Portuguese:
Superimposed lines: nada mal, mas suas linhas desviam da tragetória delas (é como se elas fizessem curvas para voltar onde deveriam parar).
Ghosted lines and ghosted planes: percebo que as linhas estão arqueadas. Se você ainda tiver esse problema, certifique-se que está desenhando com o ombro e tente curvar para a direção oposta.
Table of ellipses: boas elipses, mas algumas têm um formato estranho.
Ellipses in planes: suas elipses estão um pouco melhores, mas ainda tem deformação.
Funnels: os eixos menores estão levemente desalinhados em alguns funis, isso aconteceu porque vc pode ter errado o ângulo da linha central. Continue praticando elipses!
Plotted perspective: nada mal!
Rough perspective: este exercício é bem difícil mesmo. A primeira página não tá tão boa, mas a segunda tá melhor. Vejo que vc estendeu as linhas corretamente.
Rotated boxes: UAU! Tá Ótimo.
Organic perspective: vejo que vc entendeu o jeito de usar o peso da linha.
Gostei do que vi. Acho que vc tem muito potencial pra continuar melhorando. Escolha exercícios dessa lição e faça-os como aquecimento antes de desenhar. Sobre quantas páginas desenhar por dia, faça de um jeito que vc se sinta confortável, mas mantenha uma constância e aplique a regra dos 50%.
Vou marcar sua lição como concluída.
Next Steps:
Your next step is the famous 250 BOX CHALLENGE. Good luck :) (faça o desafio das 250 caixas)
This is a remarkable little pen. I'm especially fond of this one for sketching and playing around with, and it's what I used for the notorious "Mr. Monkey Business" video from Lesson 0. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
I would not recommend this for Drawabox - we use brush pens for filling in shadow shapes, and you do not need a pen this fancy for that. If you do purchase it, save it for drawing outside of the course.
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