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3:25 PM, Sunday September 25th 2022
Lines: I can see wobbliness in some lines, above all I can see it in ghosted and in superimposed. I can also see that in ghosted lines the lines are a little arched.
Ellipses: I can see that you have more confidence doing ellipses than lines. In the funnel exercise some ellipses are rotated from the minor axis. In table of ellipses I can see ellipses that cross the lines
Boxes: In plotted perspective I can see that some boxes have height lines that are not perpendicular to the horizon line. In rotated boxes and organic perspective I can see problems with the perspective of the boxes. This is completely normal in the beginning, and all this will be improved with practice.
I can see that you have done all the exercises and have followed the steps correctly in each one. I see that you understand the purpose of all these exercises and that's the most important thing, the mistakes you make will improve over time and practice, so I can mark the lesson as complete. Good luck with the 250 box challenge
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8:16 AM, Monday September 26th 2022
Thank you very much for the feedback!
Actually i tought to be more confident with straight lines rather then with ellipses.
Thank you again for your point of view, it was helpful.
7:15 PM, Monday October 3rd 2022
No problem, I also forgot to put a guide for the rotated boxes exercise, so here you are
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