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5:14 AM, Monday May 1st 2023

Hello,

thank you so much for your detailed critique! I appreciate that very much. Funny enough with the degree shift…I noticed now that I sometimes just hatched the wrong side…Idk why I literally did that, could be because I have done this challenge in some stressful time and wasn’t really that concentrated/aware of what I’m doing which is not really good, but neither the less, thanks for pointing it out! :’)

And thank you so much for the clarification of the line extensions like ngl I was pretty overwhelmed by all these lines etc. from the start, which made my execution of the cylinders much poorer than they could have actually been. That’s why I definitely tried to avoid these mistakes this time and be more fond of what I’m doing.

Although I noticed that my newer cylinders constructed around a minor axis are kind of wrong in the degree shifts from time to time but I varied them a lot more as well as tried to also include every line extension in the cylinders in boxes. :)

Again thank you so much for your critique! It really helped me to learn from my mistakes…Although I still have a lot to learn in case of cylinders I think that I kind of grasped their core purpose now a bit better!

Here’s the link for the new cylinders:

https://imgur.com/a/WvlLW8A

8:55 AM, Tuesday May 2nd 2023

Hi again, happy to help out. These latest revisions are a great improvement, you did everything I told you too very well! Nice work.

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