Lesson 5: Applying Construction to Animals
4:59 PM, Friday February 14th 2020
This is a continuation from my submission on Reddit.(https://www.reddit.com/r/ArtFundamentals/comments/dmqeiz/lesson_5_drawing_animals_patreon_critique_thread/fdqcw87?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x) The base lesson and the first re-do have already been critiqued.
The second re-do was done with the instruction of "in these new animal drawings, I do not want you to use any contour lines that do not define the connection between two different forms."
I think the deer/elk turned out much better than the maned wolves -- I had a hard time seeing through the fluff on the wolves. And the second wolf was done in two sittings and it really shows >.<
One question in retrospect -- in the examples, you tend to draw the leg attachments/hips as circles on the body which don't follow/emphasize the curvature of the body (for instance https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/fdffcb3a.jpg). This is all well and good when you have other contour lines, but given that I wasn't supposed to use other contour lines, would I have been better served doing those intersections as contours that followed/emphasized the curve of the body instead of just circles? If that question makes sense?
But yeah, as always, looking forward your critique! Thank you!
Re-do 1: https://imgur.com/a/sh27qBG
Re-do 2 (current) https://imgur.com/a/uq3WO5Q