Lesson 5: Applying Construction to Animals

4:59 PM, Friday February 14th 2020

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This is a continuation from my submission on Reddit.(https://www.reddit.com/r/ArtFundamentals/comments/dmqeiz/lesson_5_drawing_animals_patreon_critique_thread/fdqcw87?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x) The base lesson and the first re-do have already been critiqued.

The second re-do was done with the instruction of "in these new animal drawings, I do not want you to use any contour lines that do not define the connection between two different forms."

I think the deer/elk turned out much better than the maned wolves -- I had a hard time seeing through the fluff on the wolves. And the second wolf was done in two sittings and it really shows >.<

One question in retrospect -- in the examples, you tend to draw the leg attachments/hips as circles on the body which don't follow/emphasize the curvature of the body (for instance https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/fdffcb3a.jpg). This is all well and good when you have other contour lines, but given that I wasn't supposed to use other contour lines, would I have been better served doing those intersections as contours that followed/emphasized the curve of the body instead of just circles? If that question makes sense?

But yeah, as always, looking forward your critique! Thank you!

Re-do 1: https://imgur.com/a/sh27qBG

Re-do 2 (current) https://imgur.com/a/uq3WO5Q

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9:01 PM, Saturday February 15th 2020

Alrighty! This is a big improvement. You were doing reasonably well before, but many of your constructions now are vastly more solid, with the relationships between forms being defined with much more clarity and intent. Your organic intersections are also much better - going from a scratchy mess to clear, concise, intentional marks.

There are some issues, of course:

  • On this page I demonstrate where you've extended the silhouette of the neck without actually doing so in three dimensions (by adding additional masses). This is something you've done properly elsewhere. I also show where you try to cut into a cranial sphere form as it exists as a flat shape on the page, instead of respecting how it occupies 3D space. I've got a little explanation there of additive/subtractive construction - generally you should be using additive construction wherever possible, as it helps you better develop your understanding of 3D space and the relationships between forms. Subtractive construction is sometimes necessary, but it will usually test your understanding, and can easily be done incorrectly if you ignore how the form exists in three dimensions. The correct approach is to separate the form into two distinct, solid forms, by drawing contour lines along it (as though your pen were a scalpel), then treating one of these two forms as being negative space (an empty void) and the other as being positive space.

  • The main issues with this wolf is that along the chin and under the neck, you tried to add to the construction simply by extending the silhouette, and then adding contour lines. You didn't use the additional mass technique which actually involves adding individual forms that exist on their own, but wrap around the underlying construction.

As to your question, I'm honestly a little confused with how you phrase it, but I believe I know why. The ellipses I draw to which the legs connect are not actually contour lines sitting on the surface of the animal's body. They are themselves masses that represent the bulk of muscle you usually see on a creature's shoulder or hip joint. It actually sticks out if seen in profile, and integrates into the additional masses you may place along the creature's back, if it has prominent back muscles. This is actually something you are missing a little in some of your deer drawings (where we're seeing them from the front or from a three quarter view, like this one. I don't believe the front would have as prominent muscles, but the hind legs probably would. You capture this better in this one, where you've got a distinct mass coming all the way up over the whole of the pelvis.

Anyway! All in all, you're making excellent progress. I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete, and I'll go ahead and refund the credits you spent on this since it was an extension of the previous critique.

Next Steps:

Move onto the 250 cylinder challenge, which is a prerequisite for lesson 6.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
11:18 PM, Saturday February 15th 2020

Sweet, thank you very much!

I think I phrased my question poorly. I mean something more like "for the additional masses that make up the bulk of muscle that make up the hips/shoulders, should the intersection between said mass and the body be an elipse (as in https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/fdffcb3a.jpg) or should it be a more amorphous shape that follows the contours of the body (as in the hind leg of https://imgur.com/e0rUlTF)?"

Or does it not matter/depend on what you're doing?

1:22 AM, Sunday February 16th 2020

In the case of the wolf, since we're seeing it head-on, we don't actually see the intersection, so I don't bother to draw it. In the case of the deer, it's more of a three-quarter view where we can see the intersection, so the way you've approached it there is correct.

3:07 AM, Sunday February 16th 2020

Oooh, that makes sense. Awesome, thanks!

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