7:08 AM, Thursday June 23rd 2022
Aaaa thank you very much for this critique man!
I haven't been checking this because it said it could take weeks to get a reply, should have been looking for this way more!
And I've been revising my work and agree with what you say so yea, I think I'll add the Ellipses in planes to my dayly routine or at least do it a few times per week.
Thank you again!