12:44 PM, Thursday August 25th 2022
Thank you for the critique, I also did the extra boxes you said on next steps: https://imgur.com/a/h5M88aJ
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2:44 PM, Thursday August 25th 2022
First up: Those look great!
Your lineweight is better and your convergence shallower. Sometimes you still have the problem of a line set converging in pairs rather than as a set (e.g box 264). You also could have experimented a bit more with the shape and especially angles of the boxes.
However, when you do some boxes in your warm-ups I am sure you will become more confident and thus experimental with your boxes.
All in all, as said in the beginning, this looks great and I will mark this challenge as complete! Wish you the best for lesson 2 (:
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