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7:40 PM, Monday August 16th 2021

Thank you for the critique!

yeah I noticed it aswell after I took the photos, that later boxes look sloppier.

I agree with the downward parallel lines especially with the back corners.

I'm glad that my vanshing points got better.

I myself feel that my line weight was very wobbly between boxes either too thin or too thick, with too many times me trying to overcorret lines that felt off and resulting in thicker lines with offshoots.

2:54 PM, Tuesday August 17th 2021

Glad I could help.

Yeah, I had the same problem with adding line weight to my boxes, many many offshoots.

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