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1:41 PM, Sunday May 16th 2021
Hi Sakiusa, I'll be critiquing your submission. Congrats on completing lesson one!
Lines
Your lines in the first exercise look good! Though some of them are a tiny bit wobbly so try to ghost them a bit more (but overall you did a good job). Fraying at the ends isn't a problem, as you will improve this naturally just by practicing. The same applies to the ghosted lines and the ghosted planes. In general you did well on the lines exercises:)
Ellipses
You did a great job on the ellipses in the ellipses in tables exercise! They fit snugly in the tables and you've drawn through them twice which is good
The same applies to the ellipses in planes (accuracy will come with more practice).
In the funnels exercise you could try to rotate the ellipses more, but other than that they are also executed well.
Boxes
You executed the rough perspective exercise well! The horizontal and vertical lines are placed correctly, and you remembered to extend the lines to the horizon which is great.
You could have rotated the boxes more in the rotated boxes exercise. But this exercise is supposed to be hard so don't worry if it didn't turn out perfect.
The organic perspective exercise turned out well too, so I'll have you move on to the 250 box challenge:)
Next Steps:
250 box challenge
Faber Castell PITT Artist Pens
Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.
Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.