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10:08 AM, Saturday June 19th 2021
You did a pretty good job up to the texture exercise, maybe it would have been more helpful if you had tuned in space those organic forms a bit more since they just look all the same.
I can see that in your first pages your form intersection are not really intersecting, they are mostly floating around so it really misses the point of the exercise.
Then your pages of organic forms stacks don't really look like they belong to the same space, maybe try to add more cast shadows to better describe the form of the organic forms below.
Next Steps:
redo the last exercise while keeping in mind that you should be describing surfaces with cast shadows and not just cross contour
8:19 AM, Monday June 21st 2021
http://imgur.com/gallery/kgdBO3v
I did the last exercise.
The intersection of forms seems to be too difficult for me.
And I am very confused while adding contours to the sausage forms with different orientations in space.
1:40 PM, Monday June 21st 2021
Replace the organic forms with cylinders and try adding cross contours on them, organic forms are less clear so it's easy to get confused.
Form intersections are like the rotated boxes exercise, it's normal for it to be difficult, what is important is that you become aware of its challenges and this time you can finally feel the struggle!
Next Steps:
Good job, you have come to terms with the core concepts of this lesson! Wish you luck on the next!!
6:43 PM, Monday June 21st 2021
Thanks for your precious critique.
3:38 PM, Tuesday July 6th 2021
Hi,
I have completed the plants exercises..
Can u please critique them.
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